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ELIZANDO DOPSR MATERIALS (FOIA 22-F-1178)

Office of the Secretary of Defense · 2022 · 10 pages · text from the file's own layer

This 2022 Office of the Secretary of Defense FOIA release (22-F-1178) contains 2020 email correspondence between the Defense Office of Prepublication and Security Review and Luis Elizondo, former Director of the Advanced Aerospace Threat Identification Program, and his attorney Jeff Springer. Elizondo submitted "Alone," a partially fictionalized screenplay based on Leslie Kean's book, for security review. The emails cover delays caused by COVID-19. DOPSR cleared the screenplay for public release on November 30, 2020, without implying endorsement or factual accuracy.

  • p. 4 …Elizondo has been provided with an acknowledgment that the screenplay was received. Currently, manuscripts/screenplays are…
  • p. 9 …whs.pentagon.esd.mbx.secrev@mail.mil, and should reference the case number above. Please direct…
  • p. 10 DEPARTMENT OF DEFENSE DEFENSE OFFICE OF PREPUBLICATION AND SECURITY REVIEW 1155 DEFENSE PENTAGON WASHINGTON, DC 20301…
McHale, Kelly A CIV WHS ESD (USA)
From:
Sent:
To:
Subject:
McHale, Kelly A CIV WHS ESD (USA)
Tuesday, October 13, 2020 11:03 AM
(b)(6)
DOPSR Case 20-SB-0149 - Screenplay Review
Dear Mr. Elizondo,
This email is to confirm the Defense Office of Prepublication and Security Review (DOPSR) has commenced
prepublication review of your screenplay "Alone", received on September 30, 2020. DOPSR will conduct a security
review for classified information, controlled unclassified information, operational security related information, and a
policy review to ensure accurate statements of DoD Policy. I am the assigned action officer and the manuscript is
assigned case number 20-SB-0149.
Manuscript/screenplay reviews are averaging several months, and have been severely hampered by the current
Pandemic mitigation measures that have affected the Department. DOPSR is currently on part-time telework and has
reduced capabilities to complete manuscript/screenplay reviews efficiently. Other factors affecting review times are the
complexity of the subject matter, the volume of information, and the number of components with equity in the
manuscript/screenplay. DOPSR continues to strive to complete reviews in as timely a manner as possible.
DOPSR does not accommodate publishers' timelines, therefore, we recommend that you do not sign a contract with a
publishing company, or provide copies of the manuscript/screenplay to a publisher or other individuals until the review
is complete.
The DoD seal and seals of the Military Departments are protected by trademark restrictions: the DoD seal and the seals
of the Military Departments can only be used for official purposes. Other DoD insignia, emblems, ribbons, and medals
are protected under trademark licensing laws and require permission prior to use. See DoD Instruction 5535.12, "DoD
Branding and Trademark Licensing Program Implementation," Section 2.d. Guidance on obtaining permission to use
DoD insignia can be found at: www.defense.gov/Resources/Trademarks/Trademarks/.
If you have not done so already, please provide any photos, exhibits, tables, appendices, or any other material intended
for use in your manuscript/screenplay. These materials should be emailed to our office inbox at:
whs.pentagon.esd.mbx.secrev@mail.mil, and should reference the case number above.
Please direct any questions regarding this case to me at the contact information below.
Sincerely,
Kelly McHale
Security Review Specialist
Defense Office of Prepublication and Security Review
Tel: 703.614.4903
https://www.esd.whs.mil/DOPSR/
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